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Correction/hometown
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Correction/hometown
Message de cashmere posté le 14-04-2012 à 19:48:59 (S | E | F)
Hello
je dois écrire un texte: what would I change in my hometown?
et j'ai besoin de vos conseils et suggestions.
et si vous souhaiter vous Pourriez-vous corriger mon essai svp s'il vous plaît?
if i could change one important thing about my hometown. i would plant flowers everywhere. i think lot of people will think that is a stupid idea. but living in a world which beautiful colours dominate the view makes people feeling better. a lot of peole are sharing my idea but one hand can not applaud so in this project i will need help other people.
Merci pour votre aide, je suis vraiment débutante en anglais.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-04-2012 20:55
Message de cashmere posté le 14-04-2012 à 19:48:59 (S | E | F)
Hello
je dois écrire un texte: what would I change in my hometown?
et j'ai besoin de vos conseils et suggestions.
if i could change one important thing about my hometown. i would plant flowers everywhere. i think lot of people will think that is a stupid idea. but living in a world which beautiful colours dominate the view makes people feeling better. a lot of peole are sharing my idea but one hand can not applaud so in this project i will need help other people.
Merci pour votre aide, je suis vraiment débutante en anglais.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-04-2012 20:55
Réponse: Correction/hometown de notrepere, postée le 15-04-2012 à 00:23:23 (S | E)
Bonjourif i could change one important thing about my hometown, i would plant flowers everywhere. i think [*] lot of people will think*** that is a stupid idea. but living in a world in which beautiful colours dominate the view makes people feeling better. a lot of people are sharing(temps) my idea but one hand cannot applaud(cette tournure est un peu bizarre) so in this project i will need help [*]other people.
[*] = mot manquant
***On peut dire simplement: 'A lot of people will think' pour éviter l'emploi du même mot 'think'.
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