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Correction/what I would change
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Correction/what I would change
Message de annaellea posté le 13-04-2010 à 20:59:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai besoin vraiment de vousg j'ai un devoir à rendre demain : une rédaction.
Il faut écrire au conditionnel ce qu'on voudrait et commencer par: If I would change .....
sil vous plait, est-ce que vous pourriez voir si c'est bon et s'il y a des fautes !!!
If , I would change , first I would be friendlier and help more people . I also would be patient because sometimes I don't have enough patient to wait somebody or to do something so I don't do it and after I regret . Afterword , I would be good tempered and happy all the time because I am nearly always bad tempered or angry and i don't like that. Finally , I would like haven't glasses and have blond hair with blue eyes . I would like also to have a lot of money in order to travel around the world and meet new people . I would like also playing an instrument very well because I am found of music
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-04-2010 21:26
Message de annaellea posté le 13-04-2010 à 20:59:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai besoin vraiment de vous
Il faut écrire au conditionnel ce qu'on voudrait et commencer par: If I would change .....
sil vous plait, est-ce que vous pourriez voir si c'est bon et s'il y a des fautes !!!
If , I would change , first I would be friendlier and help more people . I also would be patient because sometimes I don't have enough patient to wait somebody or to do something so I don't do it and after I regret . Afterword , I would be good tempered and happy all the time because I am nearly always bad tempered or angry and i don't like that. Finally , I would like haven't glasses and have blond hair with blue eyes . I would like also to have a lot of money in order to travel around the world and meet new people . I would like also playing an instrument very well because I am found of music
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-04-2010 21:26
Réponse: Correction/what I would change de lamy, postée le 13-04-2010 à 21:14:26 (S | E)
bonsoir
Avant toute chose, voulez-vous vérifier la consigne qui a été donnée. Le temps n'est pas bon. Ensuite, revoyez l'emploi des temps dans les conditionnelles. En dernier lieu, retenez que "j'aimerais" se traduit par "I would like to + infinitif (ou I'd like to + inf.).
On corrigera ensuite.
Bon travail
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Modifié par lamy le 13-04-2010 21:14
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