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Message de bibou9 posté le 26-02-2010 à 23:08:42 (S | E | F)
Salut a tous
Voila mon expression écrite, si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à corriger mes erreurs ce serait gentil:
My dearest Anna,
I don't want the boring life that i am destined, I don't want to work in this oppressive world and for this consumer society. I dream of freedom and adventure. I need to get closer to nature and real values of life. That's why I went away and I regret nothing. I wants to leave everything behind.
I brought everything I need for this trip. First I hit the road hitchhiking towards Mexico but today I head to Canada. I discover new horizons and I meet people of great simplicity. The trip is sometimes tiring and difficult but it's very interesting.
I am aware that Mum should be panic-stricken and that Dad disapproves my behavior but it's my life, don't worry about me and respect my dream
That's all for now
Bob
Merci d'avance
bibou
Message de bibou9 posté le 26-02-2010 à 23:08:42 (S | E | F)
Salut a tous
Voila mon expression écrite, si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à corriger mes erreurs ce serait gentil:
My dearest Anna,
I don't want the boring life that i am destined, I don't want to work in this oppressive world and for this consumer society. I dream of freedom and adventure. I need to get closer to nature and real values of life. That's why I went away and I regret nothing. I wants to leave everything behind.
I brought everything I need for this trip. First I hit the road hitchhiking towards Mexico but today I head to Canada. I discover new horizons and I meet people of great simplicity. The trip is sometimes tiring and difficult but it's very interesting.
I am aware that Mum should be panic-stricken and that Dad disapproves my behavior but it's my life, don't worry about me and respect my dream
That's all for now
Bob
Merci d'avance
bibou
Réponse: Correction - message de gerondif, postée le 27-02-2010 à 18:31:13 (S | E)
Bonjour,
My dearest Anna,
I don't want the boring life that i am destined, I don't want to work in this oppressive world and for this consumer society. I dream of freedom and adventure. I need to get closer to nature and real values of life. That's why I went away and I regret nothing. I wants to leave everything behind.
I brought everything I need for this trip. First I hit the road hitchhiking towards Mexico but today I head to (to head for, mettez le au présent en ing)Canada. I discover new horizons and I meet people of great simplicity. The trip is sometimes tiring and difficult but it's very interesting.
I am aware that Mum should be panic-stricken and that Dad disapproves of my behavior but it's my life, don't worry about me and respect my dream
That's all for now
Bob
Réponse: Correction - message de karnie53, postée le 27-02-2010 à 23:38:21 (S | E)
1 destined; leading 2 work: live 3 for this consumer society;consuming society 4 regret:regretted 5 wants :want6 Head to Canada:Aim heading to Canada 7 about me: about myself 8 respect my dreams :realize my dreams
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