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Into the wild/correction
Message de sandra-l posté le 07-03-2009 à 14:59:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ! Alors voila pour bientôt je doit faire un exposé en anglais a l'oral , ET j'ai décidé de faire sur le film INTO THE WILD de SEAN PENN
Sachant que jai beaucoup de mal avec l'anglais , je vous demande de l'aide : =)
I am going to deal with movie into the wild. It was written And directed By SEAN PENN. It released in 2007. This film was Inspired by a true story.
Christopher McCLANDESS , agée de 22 years old ?, destroys all of his credit cards and identification documents, burn part of his savings(economies ? ) And decide to leave everything (pour partir a?) the adventure. Tout au long de son voyage, he write a book de ses adventures. his final destination, arriving in the wilds of Alaska .he discovered le Grand Canyon et la Californie.( ? ) HE "descent " the Colorado river, into Mexico,
He encounters many individuals along the way, such as a group of hippies, and a lonely leather worker who offers to adopt and be a grandfather to Christopher . Arrived to ALASKA , He starts living in a "Magic Bus" "abandoné" (deserted ? ).He discovered in Alaska le bonheur toujours recherché (?????) .
THE end is tragic, he resorts to eating indigenous plants, he confuses an edible and a poisonous variety. il mourra ( ?? he was dead , he die ?? ) .
Just avant de mourir ( before dying ? ) , Christopher McCandless "écrira au stylo sur une page de son livre" (write with a pen on a page of his book) « Happiness only real when shared »
J'aimerais avoir un corrigé et qu'on me dise les phrases que je n'arrive pas à traduire =D
Merci d'avance .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-03-2009 16:11
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Message de sandra-l posté le 07-03-2009 à 14:59:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ! Alors voila pour bientôt je doit faire un exposé en anglais a l'oral , ET j'ai décidé de faire sur le film INTO THE WILD de SEAN PENN
Sachant que jai beaucoup de mal avec l'anglais , je vous demande de l'aide : =)
I am going to deal with movie into the wild. It was written And directed By SEAN PENN. It released in 2007. This film was Inspired by a true story.
Christopher McCLANDESS , agée de 22 years old ?, destroys all of his credit cards and identification documents, burn part of his savings(economies ? ) And decide to leave everything (pour partir a?) the adventure. Tout au long de son voyage, he write a book de ses adventures. his final destination, arriving in the wilds of Alaska .he discovered le Grand Canyon et la Californie.( ? ) HE "descent " the Colorado river, into Mexico,
He encounters many individuals along the way, such as a group of hippies, and a lonely leather worker who offers to adopt and be a grandfather to Christopher . Arrived to ALASKA , He starts living in a "Magic Bus" "abandoné" (deserted ? ).He discovered in Alaska le bonheur toujours recherché (?????) .
THE end is tragic, he resorts to eating indigenous plants, he confuses an edible and a poisonous variety. il mourra ( ?? he was dead , he die ?? ) .
Just avant de mourir ( before dying ? ) , Christopher McCandless "écrira au stylo sur une page de son livre" (write with a pen on a page of his book) « Happiness only real when shared »
J'aimerais avoir un corrigé et qu'on me dise les phrases que je n'arrive pas à traduire =D
Merci d'avance .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-03-2009 16:11
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Réponse: Into the wild/correction de laure95, postée le 07-03-2009 à 18:58:27 (S | E)
Bonsoir, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
I am going to deal with the movie into the wild. It was written And directed By SEAN PENN. It released in 2007. This film was Inspired by a true story.
Christopher McCLANDESS ,
He encounters many individuals along the way, such as a group of hippies, and a lonely leather worker who offers to adopt and be a grandfather to Christopher . Arrived to ALASKA , He starts living in a "Magic Bus" "abandoné" (deserted ?: YES ).He discovered in Alaska le bonheur toujours recherché (?????) .
THE end is tragic, he resorts to eating indigenous plants, he confuses an edible and a poisonous variety. il mourra ( ?? he was dead , he die ?? : FUTUR) .
Just avant de mourir ( before dying ? : YES) , Christopher McCandless "écrira au stylo sur une page de son livre" (write with a pen on a page of his book: YES mais, attention à la 3è personne du singulier du présent simple)) « Happiness only real (il manque 1 verbe conjugué) when shared »
ATTENTION: 3è personne du singulier du présent simple + OK pour faire ton résumé au présent simple (c'est plus facile) et donc reste dans le présent simple!
