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Chris and Maria (correction)
Message de man-in-rap posté le 19-02-2008 à 18:53:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour pouvez-vous me corrigez cette "love story" s'il vous plaît? (merci d'avance)
One day, Chris meet Maria in a bar and they fall immediatly in love. They moved in togheter a lot.
After that, they again meet and they make kissed because they went out together. They chatted a little. They also rang other up.
A few weeks later, they fianced each other.
After a while, they meat each other's parents but Chris' family was enemies of Maria's family, because Chris is'nt Italian.
Next, they got married in a church and they have four Childrens. They somentimes had a row but they not split up.
In the end, they was verry happy.
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Modifié par bridg le 19-02-2008 19:03
Message de man-in-rap posté le 19-02-2008 à 18:53:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour pouvez-vous me corrigez cette "love story" s'il vous plaît? (merci d'avance)
One day, Chris meet Maria in a bar and they fall immediatly in love. They moved in togheter a lot.
After that, they again meet and they make kissed because they went out together. They chatted a little. They also rang other up.
A few weeks later, they fianced each other.
After a while, they meat each other's parents but Chris' family was enemies of Maria's family, because Chris is'nt Italian.
Next, they got married in a church and they have four Childrens. They somentimes had a row but they not split up.
In the end, they was verry happy.
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Modifié par bridg le 19-02-2008 19:03
Réponse: Chris and Maria (correction) de gyslene28, postée le 19-02-2008 à 20:38:57 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
One day, Chris meet
Maria in a bar and they fall in love. They moved in together a lot ???(tu voulais dire emmenager ensemble/ou se sont fréquentés).A few weeks later, they
x fianced. After a while, they met each other's parents but Chris' was enemies of Maria's family because Chris isn't Italian.Next, they got married in church and they have
four childrens. They somentimes had a row.In the end
, they was verry happy.Bon courage.
