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Message de john1963 posté le 11-12-2007 à 14:15:18 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Peut-on me corriger ce texte ?
Last summer I went got to L os Angeles to stay with my cousin for a few weeks.
One afternoon we were having lunch in a nice restaurant in the centre town when my cousin got a call on her mobil phone and went outside to talk.
While she spoke to her friend, I suddenly noticed a man in a black hat who was sitting at the next table.
It was a actor .
He was alone , and I was deciding to take my chance.
So, I got up and went to his table.
Excuse me , could I have my photo taken with you?
I ashed. He said, yes so stoped a waitress who was passing by and gave her my camera. She toke the photo of me and actor, I thanted then both , and then I return to my table. When my cousin came back, I smiled. Why are you looking so pleased yourself ?
She ashed .
I had my photo taken with actor .
Actor ? where is he ?
He's sitting over there . Look!
She return around to look and starded to laught .
That's not johnny .
I looked at the man in the black hat .
He laught too.
Merci.
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Modifié par mariebru le 11-12-2007 14:23
Titre
Formules de politesse (indispensables !!!!)
Message de john1963 posté le 11-12-2007 à 14:15:18 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Peut-on me corriger ce texte ?
Last summer I went got to L os Angeles to stay with my cousin for a few weeks.
One afternoon we were having lunch in a nice restaurant in the centre town when my cousin got a call on her mobil phone and went outside to talk.
While she spoke to her friend, I suddenly noticed a man in a black hat who was sitting at the next table.
It was a actor .
He was alone , and I was deciding to take my chance.
So, I got up and went to his table.
Excuse me , could I have my photo taken with you?
I ashed. He said, yes so stoped a waitress who was passing by and gave her my camera. She toke the photo of me and actor, I thanted then both , and then I return to my table. When my cousin came back, I smiled. Why are you looking so pleased yourself ?
She ashed .
I had my photo taken with actor .
Actor ? where is he ?
He's sitting over there . Look!
She return around to look and starded to laught .
That's not johnny .
I looked at the man in the black hat .
He laught too.
Merci.
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Modifié par mariebru le 11-12-2007 14:23
Titre
Formules de politesse (indispensables !!!!)
Réponse: Dem. corr. texte de williamengland, postée le 11-12-2007 à 19:47:51 (S | E)
Orthographe !
A part ça, ce n'est pas mal du tout.
Vérifie ;-
mobil, a (devant voyelle), ashed, stoped, toke, thanted, laught.
Pourquoi Got?
Centre ville, est Town centre Ou the centre of town.
Was deciding - utilise plutôt le passé simple.
.. pleased WITH yourself.
.. with actor. et Actor? What's missing?
W.
