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Thanksgiving (correction)
Message de niko456 posté le 02-12-2007 à 00:16:54 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, j'ai besoin de vos dons de correcteurs en anglais car je pense avoir fait quelques erreurs dans mon texte:
He likes helping to cook ( je voulais dire qui n'aime pas faire la cuisine mais qu'il préfère aider)
Jason didn't celebrate Thanksgiving dinner with his family because he was in France. Consequently (="as a results" ) , he didn't see his family but he called his mother...
His family put a picture of him on the table.
He has never reallly seen the famous Tksgvg Day parade in person but he could watch on TV.
Being, He didn't take care of the parade .
He watched thgvg parade on TV for fives minutes and he went to sleep.
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Modifié par bridg le 02-12-2007 16:21
Message de niko456 posté le 02-12-2007 à 00:16:54 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, j'ai besoin de vos dons de correcteurs en anglais car je pense avoir fait quelques erreurs dans mon texte:
He likes helping to cook ( je voulais dire qui n'aime pas faire la cuisine mais qu'il préfère aider)
Jason didn't celebrate Thanksgiving dinner with his family because he was in France. Consequently (="as a results" ) , he didn't see his family but he called his mother...
His family put a picture of him on the table.
He has never reallly seen the famous Tksgvg Day parade in person but he could watch on TV.
Being, He didn't take care of the parade .
He watched thgvg parade on TV for fives minutes and he went to sleep.
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Modifié par bridg le 02-12-2007 16:21
Réponse: Thanksgiving (correction) de TravisKidd, postée le 02-12-2007 à 02:56:33 (S | E)
Thanksgiving (à quoi cela sert d'enlever des lettres ?)
Réponse: Thanksgiving (correction) de niko456, postée le 02-12-2007 à 16:19:04 (S | E)
Bonjour, j'aurais besoin de vos talents de correcteurs pour mon texte:
Macy's, the world biggest department store organize the parade.Therefore the friday after Thanksgiving day everybody go to shopping for christmas in Macy's. So the friday after thanksgiving named Black friday
The biggest parade is in New york. Nevertheless there are small parade in town.
