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Violence in school (correction) (1)
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Violence in school (correction)
Message de sophie29 posté le 24-10-2007 à 20:38:16 (S | E | F | I)
BONSOIR ! voilà je dois faire un résumé d'un texte que j'ai entendu en cours mais je suis sûr qu'il ne possède encore des fautes donc si quelqu'un se sent motivé ce soir pour m'aider à les corriger, ce seraitca sré coll! merci d'avance!
VIOLENCE IN SCHOOL
Violence in schools is an increasing problem in Britain. More and more psychological or physical bulling agressions between studients. Scenes take place usually after school, in a playground, during sport activities or even in the classroom during lessons. Indeed, a groupe of teenagers attack one individual: they push him, fight him, kick him and they shut him out. This behaviour causing victims a lot of suffering. Students become nervous, stressed, scared and somebody are depressed and won't go to the school anymore. That is why, parents and teachers try to find solutions together: victims should be talk to their parents and can go see their teachers too. Nevertheless, any radical solution has been fought.
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Modifié par bridg le 24-10-2007 20:39
Message de sophie29 posté le 24-10-2007 à 20:38:16 (S | E | F | I)
BONSOIR ! voilà je dois faire un résumé d'un texte que j'ai entendu en cours mais je suis sûr qu'il ne possède encore des fautes donc si quelqu'un se sent motivé ce soir pour m'aider à les corriger, ce serait
VIOLENCE IN SCHOOL
Violence in schools is an increasing problem in Britain. More and more psychological or physical bulling agressions between studients. Scenes take place usually after school, in a playground, during sport activities or even in the classroom during lessons. Indeed, a groupe of teenagers attack one individual: they push him, fight him, kick him and they shut him out. This behaviour causing victims a lot of suffering. Students become nervous, stressed, scared and somebody are depressed and won't go to the school anymore. That is why, parents and teachers try to find solutions together: victims should be talk to their parents and can go see their teachers too. Nevertheless, any radical solution has been fought.
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Modifié par bridg le 24-10-2007 20:39
Réponse: Violence in school (correction) de sophie29, postée le 24-10-2007 à 21:33:51 (S | E)
En me relisant je me suis trouvé quelques petites erreurs...
VIOLENCE IN SCHOOL
Violence in schools is an increasing problem in Britain: There are more and more psychological or physical bullying agressions between students. Scenes take place usually after school, in a playground, during sport activities or even in the classroom during lessons. Indeed, a groupe of teenagers attacks one individual: they insult him, they shut him out and then, they fight him. This behaviour causing victims a lot of suffering. Students become nervous, stressed, scared and someone are depressed and won't go to school anymore. That is why, parents and teachers try to find solutions together: victims should talk to their parents and can consult their teachers too. Nevertheless, any radical solution has been fought.
Réponse: Violence in school (correction) de bluebutterfly, postée le 25-10-2007 à 01:18:01 (S | E)
bonjour,
Violence in schools is an increasing problem in Britain: there are more and more psychological or and physical bullying aggressions between students. Scenes take place usually after school, in a playground, during sport activities or even in the classroom during lessons. Indeed, a groupe of teenagers attacks one individual: they insult him, they shut him out and then, they fight him. This behaviour causing causes its victims a lot of suffering. Students become nervous, stressed, scared ,
Réponse: Violence in school (correction) de sophie29, postée le 25-10-2007 à 07:09:17 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup !!
