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Message de here4u posté le 30-04-2025 à 00:14:39 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement.
) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) - What do you think of ‘Mother’s Day/ Father’s Day'?
2) - Do you like camping ? With what comfort?
3) - Is telling a lie always wrong?
4) - Do you have a totem animal?
Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois la première réponse corrigée au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...
Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le dimanche 11 mai ! Go for it! with THE FORCE. 
Message de here4u posté le 30-04-2025 à 00:14:39 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement.
) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible. De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) - What do you think of ‘Mother’s Day/ Father’s Day'?
2) - Do you like camping ? With what comfort?
3) - Is telling a lie always wrong?
4) - Do you have a totem animal?
Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois la première réponse corrigée au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation... Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le dimanche 11 mai ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de here4u, postée le 30-04-2025 à 17:52:00 (S | E)
Hello dears,
ANSWER A: TOPIC 1: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what you think is clumsy...
What do you think of Mother's day, Father's day?
Mother's day, Father's day made to honour parents, were created for a mercantile purpose to revive trade. But they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers.
Furthermore, young children are so cute and pride when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at this age we have no time notion, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me 20 years after.
These special days are happiness thay we keep good memories.
for your help. Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de gerold, postée le 01-05-2025 à 09:00:27 (S | E)
Hello!
What do you think of Mother's day, Father's day?
A good text!
Mother's day
Furthermore, young children are so cute and pride when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me xx, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at this age we have no time notion, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me xx 20 years after.
These special days are happiness thay we keep good memories.
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de magie8, postée le 02-05-2025 à 22:48:37 (S | E)
hello
correction selon les indications de Gerold que je remercie
Mother's day, (and Father's day (are made to honour parents, were created for a mercantile purpose to revive trade. But they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers.
Furthermore, young children are so cute and ( proud when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me ( that, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at this age we have no time notion, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me (it 20 years after.
These special days are happiness ( that leave us fond memories.
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de here4u, postée le 04-05-2025 à 16:40:31 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Mes dernières indications après les suggestions de Magie et Gerold... que je remercie
Mother's day, (and Father's day (are made to honour parents, (revoir ponctuation et construction) were created for a mercantile purpose to revive trade. But they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers.
Furthermore, young children are so cute and ( proud when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me ( that, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at this age we have no time notion, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me (it 20 years after.
These special days are happiness ( that leave us fond memories.
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de here4u, postée le 06-05-2025 à 11:22:49 (S | E)
Hello dears!
No green after my blue?
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de here4u, postée le 06-05-2025 à 11:53:02 (S | E)
Hello dears,
here is ANSWER B: topic 2: please indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.
I often dream of camping...I'd like to live in Nature, with some comfort. I don't want must rub wood or stones to do a fire. I want to use matchs and portable stove to cook a lilltle or at last to warm tin cans. I love meeting friends and talk or sing, with guitar, near a camp fire. I would love roat marshmallows at the end of sticks...
I dream to wake up with the sound of birds chirping. I like to open my tent, feel the cool air, and put my naked feet in the wet grass.
BUT... I need my long warm shower everyday and I hate the thought of spiders, wanting to experience in my things, the wasps and the bees buzzing around me when I drink my soda or even the ants climbing my toes and feet... Hugh ! in fact I hate all insects, flying or not.
for your help! 
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de gerold, postée le 06-05-2025 à 15:53:44 (S | E)
Hello!
here is ANSWER B: topic 2: please indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.
I often dream of camping...I'd like to live in Nature, with some comfort. I don't want must xx rub wood or stones to do a fire. I want to use matchs and xx portable stove to cook a lilltle or at last to warm tin cans. I love meeting friends and talk or sing, with xx guitar, near a camp fire. I would love xx roat marshmallows at the end of sticks...
I dream to wake up with the sound of birds chirping. I like to open my tent, feel the cool air, and put my naked feet in the wet grass.
BUT... I need my long warm shower everyday and I hate the thought of spiders, wanting to experience in my things, the wasps and the bees buzzing around me when I drink my soda or even the ants climbing my toes and feet... Hugh ! in fact I hate all insects, flying or not.
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de gerold, postée le 06-05-2025 à 16:34:19 (S | E)
Hello again!
Mother's day
Furthermore, young children are so cute and ( proud when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me ( that, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum I want to tell you ??, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at
These special days are a piece of
happiness ( that leaveS us fond memories.*I wonder what the author means by "mercantile purpose". In English, mercantile is simply a synonym for "commercial", in French it is usually pejorative (= vénal/venal).
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de gerold, postée le 09-05-2025 à 12:05:14 (S | E)
Hello!
here is ANSWER B: topic 2: please indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.
I often dream of camping...I'd like to live in nature, with some comfort. I don't want
I dream to wake up with the sound of birds chirping. I like to open my tent, feel (the?) cool air, and put my
BUT... I need my long warm shower everyday and I hate the thought of spiders,
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de here4u, postée le 11-05-2025 à 23:54:33 (S | E)
ANSWER A: TOPIC 1: What do you think of Mother's day, Father's day? initial text.
Mother's day, Father's day made to honour parents, were created for a mercantile purpose to revive trade. But they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers.
Furthermore, young children are so cute and pride when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at this age we have no time notion, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me 20 years after.
These special days are happiness thay we keep good memories.
What do you think of Mother's day, Father's day? gerold's indications.
A good text!
Mother's day, xx Father's day xx made to honour parents, were created for a mercantile purpose to revive trade. But they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers.
Furthermore, young children are so cute and pride when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me xx, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at this age we have no time notion, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me xx 20 years after.
These special days are happiness thay we keep good memories.
Magie's corrections: selon les indications de Gerold que je remercie
Mother's day, (and Father's day (are made to honour parents, were created for a mercantile purpose to revive trade. But they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers.
Furthermore, young children are so cute and ( proud when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me ( that, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at this age we have no time notion, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me (it 20 years after.
These special days are happiness ( that leave us fond memories.
Bonnes corrections...
ANSWER A: Mes dernières indications après les suggestions de Magie et Gerold... que je remercie
Mother's day, (and Father's day (are made to honour parents, (revoir ponctuation et construction) were created for a mercantile purpose to revive trade. But they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers. B
Furthermore, young children are so cute and ( proud when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me ( that, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at this age we have no time notion, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me (it 20 years after.
These special days are happiness ( that leave us fond memories.
ANSWER A: Gerold's suggestions.
Mother's day,no comma) (and Father's day , (comma) (are made to honour parents, (revoir ponctuation et construction) were created for a mercantile (venal ?)* purpose to revive trade. But would "However" be better? they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers.
Furthermore, young children are so cute and ( proud when they offer their mum a present of their own making.B Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint,* or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me ( that, when I was 3 years old, I said to her:"I can't write you a poem, but I'll tell you my little mum I want to tell you ??, I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at this that age we have no time notion of time, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me of (it 20 years after.
These special days are a piece of happiness ( that leaveS us fond memories.
*I wonder what the author means by "mercantile purpose". In English, mercantile is simply a synonym for "commercial", in French it is usually pejorative (= vénal/venal).
- a mercantile (venal ?)* purpose to revive trade: why not simply 'commercial reasons'?
I think 'to revive trade' is really too strong. I'm not sure that the sales for Mothers' Day, and Fathers' Day can 'revive' trade by their only actions... When they come to buying something (when kids are older) or when the other parent buys something, they may boost the sales of roses and chocolates but not significantly... and not 'revive' trade if it were slack... [ 'were' de l'irréel. Tout le monde l'a reconnu ?]
- I was given a noodle necklace -that I still have
- mine was painted, but not golden !
- Bien se souvenir de la différence entre 'this age' (ici, 3 years old) et 'that age' éloigné temporellement de l'âge initial (au moins 23 ans)
- To remind somebody of something; rappeler quelque chose à quelqu'un.
- je préférerais "moments of happiness that leave us...'
Un très bon texte qui a été très bien corrigé.
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ANSWER B: topic 2: initial text.
I often dream of camping...I'd like to live in Nature, with some comfort. I don't want must rub wood or stones to do a fire. I want to use matchs and portable stove to cook a lilltle or at last to warm tin cans. I love meeting friends and talk or sing, with guitar, near a camp fire. I would love roat marshmallows at the end of sticks...
I dream to wake up with the sound of birds chirping. I like to open my tent, feel the cool air, and put my naked feet in the wet grass.
BUT... I need my long warm shower everyday and I hate the thought of spiders, wanting to experience in my things, the wasps and the bees buzzing around me when I drink my soda or even the ants climbing my toes and feet... Hugh ! in fact I hate all insects, flying or not.
ANSWER B: topic 2: gerold's indications.
I often dream of camping...I'd like to live in Nature, with some comfort. I don't want must xx rub wood or stones to do a fire. I want to use matchs and xx portable stove to cook a lilltle or at last to warm tin cans. I love meeting friends and talk or sing, with xx guitar, near a camp fire. I would love xx roat marshmallows at the end of sticks...
I dream to wake up with the sound of birds chirping. I like to open my tent, feel the cool air, and put my naked feet in the wet grass.
BUT... I need my long warm shower everyday and I hate the thought of spiders, wanting to experience in my things, the wasps and the bees buzzing around me when I drink my soda or even the ants climbing my toes and feet... Hugh ! in fact I hate all insects, flying or not. (and you might not like camping very much!)
Answer B: topic 2: gerold's suggestions.
I often dream of camping...I'd like to live in nature, with some comfort. I don't want
I dream to wake up with the sound of birds chirping. I like to open my tent, feel (the?)[Je le laisserais. C'est la qualité de l'air précis de ce jour de camping où il fait frais...) cool air, and put my naked bare feet in the wet grass (in wet grass?).On peut aussi accepter avec l'article pour les mêmes raison que pour l'air frais.)
BUT... I need my long warm shower everyday and I hate the thought of spiders,
Expression inégale. Des fautes étonnantes que j'ai tendance à penser être de l'inattention, mais qui sont tout de même trop nombreuses pour en être... Par ailleurs, de très bons passages et du vocabulaire "au point" : stove/ marshmallows/ sticks/ ants/bees and wasps/. Un tout petit peu plus d'attention (ou une relecture) et ceci sera prometteur.
Bravo aux rédacteurs et aux correcteurs qui ont très bien travaillé !
et Je vous rappelle que je corrige les phrases ou textes que vous voulez me soumettre en Follow up Work. Encore
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Attention ! Il y aura un rappel important au sujet de '20 years after'. (Je ne veux pas le mettre ici parce qu'il risque de passer inaperçu pour ceux/ celles qui auront déjà regardé la correction... Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de magie8, postée le 12-05-2025 à 15:45:27 (S | E)
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Mother's day and Father's day, are made to honour parents, were created for commercial reasons on purposeto boost sales
"However they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers.
Furthermore, young children are so cute and proud when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint,* or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me that, when I was 3 years old, I said to her: "I can't write you a poem, but I tell you my little mum I love you" I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at that age we have no time notion of time, however she was so moved, that she still reminded me of it 20 years after.
These special days are moments of happiness that leave us fond memories.
NB je peux vous assurer que la fete des meres est une occasion de grande affluence dans les commerces, non seulement pour les fleurs et la confiserie, mais aussi les parfums, tous les colifichets et accessoires de mode, (bijouteries,foulards, maroquinerie etc..) tous les petits appareils menagers, la librairie, disques, papeterie, les petits objets de decoration, les restaurants, traiteurs, patisseries, les deplacements (train, stations services, peages) c'est beaucoup de chiffre d'affaires en plus
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Modifié par magie8 le 12-05-2025 16:24
Réponse : Let's suggest 85/ Taking it easy 31 de gerold, postée le 12-05-2025 à 18:44:13 (S | E)
Hello!
follow up topic1
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magie!Mother's day and Father's day,
However they are also days that strengthen emotional ties and give us the opportunity to say and reaffirm our attachment to our mothers and fathers.
Furthermore, young children are so cute and proud when they offer their mum a present of their own making. Sometimes it's a simple coloured card, a noodle necklace covered in gold paint, or a heart made of salt dough, whatever it is, it's always touching.
My mum told me that, when I was 3 years old, I said to her: "I can't write you a poem, but I tell you my little mum I love you". I said that 3 days after Mother's Day, at that age we have no
These special days are moments of happiness that leave us fond memories.
NB je peux vous assurer que la fete des mères est une occasion de grande affluence dans les commerces, non seulement pour les fleurs et la confiserie, mais aussi les parfums, tous les colifichets et accessoires de mode, (bijouteries,foulards, maroquinerie etc..) tous les petits appareils ménagers, la librairie, disques, papeterie, les petits objets de décoration, les restaurants, traiteurs, patisseries, les déplacements (train, stations services, péages) c'est beaucoup de chiffre d'affaires en plus.
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